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Many education systems around the world give more importance to the subjects of maths and science than to the subject of art. Some believe that art is an essential part of society and should be given more importance.

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In a society, we humans, as
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social
creature
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, mainly interact
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 other by words/verbally. We do
this
 to transmit our messages of feelings, emotions, ideas and so on. To extend
this
 message, we illustrate our words by
art
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artworks
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works
.
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Art
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works
 are one of the most powerful decision-making and persuading tool.
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, we can not totally deny the role of math and science to create
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magnificent
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art
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works
. To illustrate the importance of arts in a society, we can just look around our environment. We will see a lot of huge and outstanding historical buildings,
such
 as palaces, museums,
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. Most of them are registered as a cultural heritage of
human-beings
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 by
UN
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. Most of them are gripping and brilliant
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art
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works
. They represent their era with distinctive features. Today they become a mainstream of
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 to design and create new modern cities. To create
such
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excellent and impressive buildings, how we can deny the help of math to calculate those architectural
works
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 Once again, how we can deny the assistance of chemistry to build strong and
colorful
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 buildings, gardens and paintings
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 To conclude, we must improve our ability of
art
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 sensibility.
Thus
, we can differentiate our way of
expression
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 of
inspirations
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inspiration
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,
imaginations
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 and impressions.
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, we should embrace the need and help of math and science.
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