People Value the opinions of others and collect information from various sources when considering a major purchase. Which of the following do you think has the greatest impact on their choice what to buy? recommendations from friends information from magazines reviews from online communities

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When people want to buy a new thing they collect information from

recommendations

from their

friends

or by reading reviews from online websites.In my opinion, there is some reason why I think their

friends

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recommendations

has

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more impact on their choices.Namely, more trust in

friends

' opinions , better knowing their taste by close bodies .

However

, some people have

a different points

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a different point

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of view that will be

discussion

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in the following essay . Individuals have a variety of source to choose a specific thing to buy and

friends

are the best one because,

initially

, more reliable

recommendations

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given from

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friend , they want to their friend purchase high quality and cheaper stuff , and when they see a shop have a good sales they make aware others .

Additionally

, when a person knows you for a long time they usually better notice the

person'

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test .

For instance

, which colours he likes or which material he prefers for clothes.

as a result

friends

are more dependable sources .

On the other hand

, it is believed online reviews are more trustable because ,

firstly

, a lot

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of people have

experiences

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of using a specific possess and they all share their views on online websites.

Thus

they provide

a veracity information

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veracity information

a piece of veracity information

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for each desire.

Secondly

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these websites the negative and positive aspects of using

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apply

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stuff are discussed and choosing a better one is

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easier. In conclusion, despite the benefits that

friends

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recommendations

have, online reviews though has some advantages .

For instance

, variety range of information, and

the

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useful discussions about

benefits

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and drawbacks of using something .

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2Word repetition
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16Grammar mistakes
 

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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