People Value the opinions of others and collect information from various sources when considering a major purchase. Which of the following do you think has the greatest impact on their choice what to buy? recommendations from friends information from magazines reviews from online communities

When people want to buy a new thing they collect information from

recommendations

from their

friends

or by reading reviews from online websites.In my opinion, there is some reason why I think their

friends

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recommendations

has

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more impact on their choices.Namely, more trust in

friends

' opinions , better knowing their taste by close bodies .

However

, some people have

a different points

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of view that will be

discussion

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in the following essay . Individuals have a variety of source to choose a specific thing to buy and

friends

are the best one because,

initially

, more reliable

recommendations

is

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given from

close

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friend , they want to their friend purchase high quality and cheaper stuff , and when they see a shop have a good sales they make aware others .

Additionally

, when a person knows you for a long time they usually better notice the

person'

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test .

For instance

, which colours he likes or which material he prefers for clothes.

as a result

,

friends

are more dependable sources .

On the other hand

, it is believed online reviews are more trustable because ,

firstly

, a lot

of

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of people have

experiences

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experience

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of using a specific possess and they all share their views on online websites.

Thus

they provide

a veracity information

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veracity information

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for each desire.

Secondly

,

in

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these websites the negative and positive aspects of using

a

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stuff are discussed and choosing a better one is

more

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easier. In conclusion, despite the benefits that

friends

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recommendations

have, online reviews though has some advantages .

For instance

, variety range of information, and

the

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useful discussions about

benefits

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and drawbacks of using something .