You recently completed a course and youu borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book it was. How helpful wa the book? Explain why you couldn't return it in time.

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Dear Ms/Mrs. Smith, I'm writing

this

letter to inform you that two weeks ago, I borrowed a book so I can use it as a reference for my essay assignment. I was supposed to return it three days ago, but it slipped my mind. The name of the book is "How to cook everything" by Matt Bittman, and all I can say is that the author was a brilliant fellow. We had a cooking class

this

semester and, for some reason, I became fond of cooking. I want to learn how to cook different cuisine so I keep coming back to the library to borrow all kinds of

the

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cooking handbooks. As I'm doing my essay, I

also

try to follow the instructions written there. There are all kinds of food written in that book, and I wanted to try all of them.

Hence

, it's probably the reason why I forgot the deadline for its return. If possible, may I know how can I hand

this

handbook back to the library? Are there forms I have to sign up for or fines if I didn't hand over it on time? Please do let me know about the process. Yours truly, Anne

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You recently completed a course and youu borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book it was. How helpful wa the book? Explain why you couldn't return it in time.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

There has been an increase in usage of social networking website in the last decades or so. Do the advantage of this outweigh disadvantage.

In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers in growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extend do you agree?