These days, in many countries fewer and fewer want to became teacher, particularly in secondary school. what are the reason for this, and how could the proble, be solved.

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number of
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are getting
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, especially in
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highschools
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. The main reason is that young students are
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and
lecturers
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inconvenient
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behaviours. To deal with
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salary to teachers.
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with,
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attitudes
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people
have bothered the
lecturers
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would dispute the fact that the most unbearable term
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young
people
for teachers is
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the adolescent
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era when kids have been affected by diverse
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hormones
hormons
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hormones
associated with their process of getting older.
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, generally, young
people
have a tendency to do not obey the formal or informal rules due to
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hormones
which are cited above and they have
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admitted
the
lecturer
as a representer of
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authority
that should be
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opposed
. To solve
this
issue might be given to
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lecturers
more money than other teachers. It seems to that giving
exra
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payment to these
people
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. By
this
means,
this
job can gain its charming to back and
lecturers
might
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benefit
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from
this
opportunity.
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, a young teacher
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candidate
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be consider
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the money issue and he could
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choose
being
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lecturer
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in secondary school. To conclude, the problem is that in a number of countries many
people
do not want to be a
lecturer
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in secondary schools caused by
inappropriate
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behaviors
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of adolescents can
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with extra payment to these
lectuters
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lecturers
lectures
letters
.
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