Old people compete with young people in the same job . Discuss and give opinion

In
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contemporary epoch,there are a plethora of jobs,which have big
competitions
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with youths and elder
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,because of the increase in numbers of unemployment.The reasons along with solutions
,
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will be
further
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explained below.
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,many companies prefer to accept youngers, because they are highly qualified and have awareness
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the utilization of technology.
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,if teenagers learn more about technical devices,they will be accepted promptly in lucrative Jobs rather than old
people
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who have no knowledge about how to use
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computers.A prime example is that multinational corporations,in Egypt,hire
people
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with high certificates and have information in the field of artificial intelligence.
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,the
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juvenile
juveniles
should care
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their education to get a job with
prestigious
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salary.
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,the pivotal solution to tackle
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issue is to provide training programs to
people
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who are above 40 years to learn the usage of technology.To illustrate,when universities help seniors to gain experiences by teaching them all about the internet,
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will open ways Infront of them to find job opportunities.
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,more foreign countries nowadays have become interested in teaching adults how to handle
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cutting-edge technology.
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,
people
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who are forty or above can learn more,and
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may lead to
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the unemployment problems. In conclusion,after
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essay has manifested the abovementioned points,it can be
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reiterated
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that the authorities in each country should ameliorate
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highly
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burden of joblessness and provide them with all facilities to be able to obtain a well-paid job,which
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them to improve their lives.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Job satisfaction
  • Mental and emotional well-being
  • Stress
  • Depression
  • Financial instability
  • Quality of life
  • Job dissatisfaction
  • Career goals
  • Skills and experiences
  • Networking opportunities
  • Social isolation
  • Productivity
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