More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, people prefer to move out of their native

place

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where their family and local people live in search of

a good opportunities

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good opportunities

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and enhancement of

standard

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the standard

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of living.

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essay will decipher how the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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, the major advantages

from

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staying away from their local

place

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is

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due to getting better opportunities, growth, and lifestyle. It is increasingly common in

modern

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era that many

has

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changed their priorities and migrated to places where

career

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enhancement, better standard of living and other facilities

is

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easily available.

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, in today’s world,

majority

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the majority

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of students enrolled

their self

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themself

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in foreign universities for better education,

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career

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and career

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development and remain distant from the

place

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where they lived earlier.

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, the disadvantages

from

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being distant from the native

place

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is

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that they may face challenges in survival, feeling isolated,

adaptability

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and adaptability

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issues may be due to climate change, environment, and language barrier.

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, it all depends on the life goals of an individual. To illustrate

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, Pupils

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who engage

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engage

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in

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first

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line of defence may face challenges but choose their ambition and stay away from the

place

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where friends and family live.

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, individuals are becoming

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self-independent

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self- independent

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self-independent

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,

mature

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and mature

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and

learn

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learning

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how to survive alone without being around the native people and environment. To conclude, in today’s world many are opting to move out of their birthplace or local town

for

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to

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development

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of

career

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, surroundings and

achieving

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their goals.

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, better life and

successful

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career

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may outweigh its drawback which may come along

in

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apply

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a

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path

such

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as survival issues and

feeling

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feelings

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of isolation.