Behaviour and lifestyles vary from country to country. Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
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of travellers tends to visit various Nations day by day. It is a Correct your spelling
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debateable
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first
and foremost is that behaving accordingly
to the local traditions decreases the possibility of conflicts and embarrassment because if the visitor do
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to
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the UK
where as
it is quite common in India so if an Indian knows about Correct your spelling
whereas
this
beforehand he can be saved from being embarrassed.
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locals
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will show respect to the locals and locals will also
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tourists
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite