Behaviour and lifestyles vary from country to country. Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

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A lot
Alot
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A lot
of travellers tends to visit various Nations day by day. It is a
debateable
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fact that tourists should behave as per the customs as well as traditions of the host country. I fully agree with
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to articulate my agreement points in detail. There are myriad
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points favouring my stance.
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first
and foremost is that behaving
accordingly
to the local traditions decreases the possibility of conflicts and embarrassment because if the visitor
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local norms it may hurt the local feelings. To cite an example, asking about the salary in
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is considered rude
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it is quite common in India so if an Indian knows about
this
beforehand he can be saved from being embarrassed. Probing ahead,
tourist
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come to gain more knowledge and know about tradition in
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way
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if they live
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lifestyle of
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in
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nation.
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will show respect to the locals and locals will
also
give efforts to make
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more comfortable and happy.
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to know the culture of Punjab when tourists visit
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temple and everyone
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their head with
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and
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respect to the tradition and the
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community offers food to them. To conclude
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, adopting
culture
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and
tradition
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traditions
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of
host
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country will be helpful for
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and
this
will make a global village
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