big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that large

wage

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are more fruitful than the

security

of the activity.

Fee

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are part of a

person

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business ,so

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department

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have

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to see their

income

also

while working in the association.

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essay will highlight both views,but I partially agree with the statement. On the one hand,pay

are

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important for all staff if they are not getting proper wages they leave the place and go to apply other companies where they are getting more earnings.Employers must ensure that all

university

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working in their team are getting proper

salary

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or not.

In addition

,with the help of their ,

income

they can fulfil their dreams and can enhance their quality of life.They can live a better

lifestyles

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and enjoys all the colours of life.They can go out with their family or friends for enjoying

this

will

also

motivate them to do more hard work,and reach

to

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a higher position in their party.So that their payroll will

also

increase.

On the other hand

,some believe that task

security

is more significant than big

income

.Suppose if an individual assignment is not secure

then

what's the benefit of higher

income

.

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Career satisfaction gave relaxation to the department that their future is secure, and they do not have to find any other activity .

However

,

this

also

displays the financial position of the association,if more staff are quitting

from

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their place

then

the financial position of the team is in doubt,and a myriad of

club

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does not deal with them.

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will show the bad impact of the community on other companies.If the task of the workers

are

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safe they work more actively than past.The company will benefit from

this

and

this

will

also

help to increase its sale apply the group. In conclusion,

although

everyone has different thinking apply I

believes

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that activity

security

is more important rather than

big

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fee. Appointment

security

helps

further

in apply life than getting big earnings

,

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if our task

are

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secure

then

with a lot of hard work an individual can gain large stipend.