You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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The abbreviated title Mr. seems to be punctuated incorrectly. Consider changing the punctuation.

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Sharma, I am writing
letter in order to request you to give me a week's off to complete my business communications course. I have to appear for my final exam
week. So, I would need some time to prepare for the examination. I understand that my work would suffer due to
, I would compensate the same by staying back for extra time in the office after I finish my course. I have
instructed my colleague,
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Gupta, to discuss the quarterly report that I have finished today.
, there would not be
much problem
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many problems

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with my current duties. As far as the benefits of
course are concerned, it would help me hone my communication skills.
As a result
, I shall be able to communicate with our clients in a better way.
would definitely prove beneficial not only for me but
for our organization. Please let me know about your decision about the same. I am hoping for a positive response. Yours sincerely Shikha Sharma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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