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In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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Choosing a location for travellers is the very
first
 step and it is quite important. Travelling to domestic cities and tourist sites or visiting a foreign country is an essential question that needs to be answered by people before preparing for a trip. Recently it seems that local destination is on the top of the list of travellers. I partially agree with
this
 decision and in
this
 essay, I am going to share some of my personal experiences in
this
 regard. We are almost agreeing about the main purpose of a holiday trip. Spending quality time can add more joy and fun to our daily life. I believe Choosing the right location to visit depends on some major factors, in my point of view two of them are very important, I mean budget and time. Travelling inside the country and visiting local cities is usually faster and easier.
Also
, travellers have other advantages like the same language and almost the same culture. But
on the other hand
, travelling out of home town and home country has lots of valuable experiences and mostly more excitement compared to the local trips. Knowing new people with different lifestyles or tasting new food is always interesting. It may usually be costly versus local explorations, but it is worth it.
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