Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more houses. Should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside. What is your opinion?

Urbanization is one of the major problems today. The increasing population of each country is

also

a major reason for urbanization. Due to

this

rapid increase in the

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population most countries try to build new

houses

in the

countryside

by creating new towns. Some countries try to develop these new

houses

in existing

cities

rather than not developing new

cities

. My opinion is developing new

houses

in existing

cities

is better than developing new

cities

in the

countryside

. In

this

,

eassay

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I try to prove my opinion with examples. In the

first

section

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I will show the

impact

on the

environment

and in the

second

I show the

impact

on the

people

if government build new

houses

by creating new

cities

in the

countryside

.

By creating

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new

cities

it will highly

impact

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the

environment

for different reasons. Constructing new

houses

in the

countryside

means it definitely destroys lots of

trees

.

Trees

are doing essential services to maintain environmental cycles like the

food

cycle

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and

water

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the water

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cycle

.

Therefore

loss of the

trees

may be caused to the animals directly. Especially for vegetarians who are in the

first

stage of the

food

cycle

. These vegetarians die and due to ,

this

it may highly affect the other stages

also

. The

next

environmental issue is the

impact

on the water

cycle

. Developing new

cities

directly

affect

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the stability of the soil. So if we develop new

cities

it may cause soil erosions. When it happens it may be the root cause of flooding. These are some facts that may directly affect to cycles of nature. Creating new

cities

not only affects the

environment

but

also

people

. As I mentioned above paragraph when the

trees

are destroyed it will be really hard to find

food

for

people

. Humans are

also

members of the

environment

and they are playing different stages in the

food

cycle

.

Therefore

unbalancing

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the

food

cycle

will directly affect the

people

.

Trees

providing

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oxygen to the

environment

and they

are absorb

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the

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carbon dioxide which is not good for

people

.

Loss

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The loss

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of

trees

directly causes air problems. Today we hear lots of news which causes death due to air

pollutions

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. The maximum life period of

people

may be rapidly reduced by urbanization. Other than that enjoying nature may help to relax our minds. But creating new

cities

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directly affects that reason

also

. Due to the above

reasons

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I feel that developing new

houses

in existing

cities

is better than developing new

houses

in new

cities

.