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The
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and
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provide
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details about international
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in four different English-speaking
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at two points in time, in 2004 and 2012. Overall both the
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and the
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illustrate the increase in the
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of foreign
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in anglophone
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, the
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displays
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information via numbers in thousands and the
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showcases
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as a
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of the total
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of
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. The
bar
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chart
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shows a clear rise in the
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of
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in all
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. The USA has the most
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of foreign
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2004 and remains
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the greatest peak in 2012 as well. Climbing from approximately 175 thousand
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to just under 250 thousand
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.
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,
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increase is not seen in the
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, as it interrupts the
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as a
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of total
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, and the
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of total foreign
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remains
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2% in 2012, the same as in 2004.
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, the greatest rise in the
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of foreign
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is seen in Australia, which has a 5% increase from 2004 to 2012. Even though
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it is the
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highest peak on the
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in 2012. In comparison to the UK which is the
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highest peak on the
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in 2012 but only has a 4% rise from 2004.
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both
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have the same starting point in 2004 at approximately 125 thousand
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