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The

table

and

bar

chart

provide

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details about international

students

in four different English-speaking

countries

at two points in time, in 2004 and 2012. Overall both the

table

and the

bar

chart

illustrate the increase in the

number

of foreign

students

in anglophone

countries

.

However

, the

bar

chart

displays

this

information via numbers in thousands and the

table

showcases

this

as a

percentage

of the total

number

of

students

. The

bar

chart

shows a clear rise in the

number

of

students

in all

countries

. The USA has the most

number

of foreign

students

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begin

with in

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2004 and remains

as

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the greatest peak in 2012 as well. Climbing from approximately 175 thousand

students

to just under 250 thousand

students

.

Nevertheless

,

this

increase is not seen in the

table

, as it interrupts the

number

as a

percentage

of total

students

, and the

percentage

of total foreign

students

remains

as

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2% in 2012, the same as in 2004.

Furthermore

, the greatest rise in the

percentage

of foreign

students

is seen in Australia, which has a 5% increase from 2004 to 2012. Even though

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it is the

third

highest peak on the

bar

chart

in 2012. In comparison to the UK which is the

second

highest peak on the

chart

in 2012 but only has a 4% rise from 2004.

Although

both

countries

have the same starting point in 2004 at approximately 125 thousand

students

.