You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Principal, I am writing

this

letter with regards to the open position of

sports

teacher .

Hence

, I would like to recommend one of my childhood friends who knows me since my school days.

In addition

, we both did our schooling and graduated from the same institutions. He has completed his master's degree in a reputed university in the United States of America and secured a gold medal in physical

sports

presentations.

Furthermore

, he

also

contributed his knowledge and extended support to the national-level

sports

committee and selections as well.

Therefore

, I strongly believe that

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he is the best in

sports

activities despite his academic top records.

Furthermore

, he has done phenomenal participation in all the games and

this

would be an immaculate asset to our school and students as well.

However

, Undoubtedly, the profound experience that he is having would be priceless in the market. I look forward to hearing an update on

this

letter and I hope it will come soon. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

167 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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