Some people consider that just governmental leaders and big companies can alleviate environmental problems and take action on global warming, while the contribution of citizens has no impact on improving the environment. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with the viewpoint.

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that just
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governmental
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leaders and big companies can relieve the environmental
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it, but the contribution of people has no
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environment
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environment
. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with the viewpoint.
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the
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great power comes great responsibility on the earth.
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to
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the
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or took place the war.
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of things for solving the
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cause a little bit
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inconvenience
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of cans or bottles can be recycled nowadays as people can just put them
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the recycling bin which already is helping
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the world. In
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, the gas
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emission
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is one of the majority reason to cause
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their own car to work or normal traffic. In conclusion, everyone in part of the earth should help to save the world together and not just only the leaders. Because we have
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to do that and we were the one who made
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strongly disagree with the contribution of citizens has no impact on improving the environment.
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