Some people consider that just governmental leaders and big companies can alleviate environmental problems and take action on global warming, while the contribution of citizens has no impact on improving the environment. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with the viewpoint.

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. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with the viewpoint.

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great power comes great responsibility on the earth.

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situation. So people can use public transportation

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their own car to work or normal traffic. In conclusion, everyone in part of the earth should help to save the world together and not just only the leaders. Because we have

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strongly disagree with the contribution of citizens has no impact on improving the environment.