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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrated the successful driving test numbers from 1980 to 2000 with respect to
male
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 and female population in a country
belonged
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 to Asia. It is clear that women archived
highest
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 pass rates on driving throughout the years. highlighted in 2000, while the number of male drivers had increased slowly,
in addition
, the lowest figure
caculated
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calculated
 in 1980 for men. The variations in
this
 chart can be summarized as follows: As can be seen from the female chart, there had been a slight increase to 52 after ten years since 1980. Continuously going up, the passing driver rates changed from 52 to nearly 70, reaching a peak in 2000, but
then
 dropped slowly to 65 in 2010/ Regarding the demonstration of male passing rates on driving
test
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. there was a considerably grow to 37 in 1990 after ten years,
then
 gradually rose by 50 in 2000.
Suprisingly
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Surprisingly
, the figure for male drivers who passed the test
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remained
remianed
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remained
 stable at 50 in 2010
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