Some people prefer to live in a house,while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
More and more
friends
think about to immigrate
from Change the verb form
immigrating
downtown
to the small town where we live now science the epidemic started three years before. The crucial reason is that in
Change preposition
apply
downtown
they have to live in Add an article
an apartment
apartment
which Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
are
small and expensive, they don’t know when will the whole building become a temporal jail in one night.
For me, Change the verb form
is
sometime
I think I am so lucky to move out from Replace the word
sometimes
downtown
5 years before while my daughter was 2 and half
Add an article
a half
year
old. Just as my wife mentioned to many Fix the agreement mistake
years
friends
, we have to go out from the small box every weekend. We went to park
, with toys, kid Correct article usage
the park
bicycle
and others like every family who lived in Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
apartment
too.
Add an article
the apartment
an apartment
Apartment
is not good for Add an article
The apartment
bring
up Change the verb form
bringing
Add an article
a kid
kid
. He has small space to run,to use his or her hands, Fix the agreement mistake
kids
has
no new our hood to contact. Today Children have more toys and Correct word choice
and has
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
creativities
, more Replace the word
creativity
knowledges
and Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
friends
, more classes and less
memories Change the quantifier
fewer
on
childhood. Partly because living in Change preposition
of
apartment
,means you have no public space to express yourself and no community too. Living in Add an article
an apartment
the apartment
apartment
for kids means lonely.
To live in Add an article
an apartment
small
town and have Add an article
a small
a
independent Change the article
an
house
is much different. First
, you have connection
with nature, with Add an article
a connection
land
. Add an article
the land
For example
,just 2 month
before, a mother cat brought 3 little kittens come to our Change to a plural noun
months
house
. It is sadly
that one of the kittens died, Replace the word
sad
my
daughter took care Correct word choice
and my
the
other 2. We saw the cats Change preposition
of the
grown
up day by day, til they left. It is something normal here but never could happen in Wrong verb form
grow
apartment
, and to be honest, I believe that it could be a good memory Add an article
an apartment
the apartment
for
my daughter’s childhood.
Meanwhile to Change preposition
of
lived
in Wrong verb form
live
house
here, means community or party. Add an article
a house
In
Change preposition
At
weekend
, we could invite Add an article
the weekend
a weekend
neighbors
to have Change the spelling
neighbours
babeque
, play Correct your spelling
barbeque
barbecue
guitar
, Change the article
the guitar
drink
beer. Kids play with each other. No one would come to say you are too noisy, and fire is dangerous blabla.
Of course, anything Correct word choice
and drink
have
disadvantages. Change the verb form
has
In
Change preposition
Downtown
downtown
life could be more effective, you have lots of shopping malls, lots of entertainment, like cinemas,bars
. Meanwhile, educational resources mostly Correct word choice
and bars
be
nearby Change the verb form
are
partments
. Someone would Correct your spelling
apartments
also
say stay
in Wrong verb form
staying
apartment
could be Correct article usage
an apartment
more safe
,which is rational too.
Replace the words
safer
However
, as I always said to my friends
who lived in
Change preposition
apply
downtown
, you can not get everything you want, just write them down, choose the priorities and made decisions. Just like me, I would like to make sure my daughter have
a lovely and sweet childhood, which could be Change the verb form
has
a
strong support for her heart. She Remove the article
apply
need
to practice Change the verb form
needs
on
how to connect with the land, the cats, Change preposition
apply
her
Correct word choice
and her
friends
and practice how to love and be loved. Therefore
, house
is much better than Correct article usage
a house
apartment
for people like me.Add an article
an apartment
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