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Being a celebrity such as film star or singer brings problem as well as benefit. Do you think that being a celebrity bring more benefit or more problem?

#celebrity #film #star #singer #benefit
Social media platforms are the way of life for many
people
 today and the
celebrity
 culture is at the heart of
this
.
People
 are discussing if
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 has more pros or cons. The following passages will highlight why
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benefits
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the benfits
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benfits
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benefits
 outweigh
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the
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the
 disadvantages.
First
 of all, humans are social creatures,
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 the level of fame,
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the higher
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 the level of status in
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society. As
such
 celebrities like sports
perosnalities
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personalities
 and film stars are considered role models.
This
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 these
people
 to
inlfuence
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influence
 ordinary
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people's
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 lives. Like when
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the Indian
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government
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government
 hired numerous sports stars to encourage the public to vote in the election. Thereby
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 the participation of the general folks by 20
percent
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.
Furthermore
,
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 of
celebrity
 grants a lot of special rights which allow these
people
 to live life easier.
This
 can be seen
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 how celebrities do not have to stand in lines. easier access to shops,
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restaurants
restraunts
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restaurants
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and
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and
 many other
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social
socila
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social
 establishments. All of these small privileges, allow
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popular individuals to live
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their
there
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their
 life to
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their
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their
 full potential. Alternatively, there are
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 drawbacks
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 fame.
Firstly
, celebrities have no privacy. So. all these good and bad deeds are in the public for all to see.
This
 not only creates a great deal of stress but
also
 their mistakes are remembered more than their victories.
For example
, famous footballer John Smith is now more known for his tax case than his charity work. In conclusion,
people
 who reached the rank of
celebrity
 in our culture
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 to give up some of their basic rights like privacy, but in
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 they gain an outsize influence on
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society. So, I
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believe
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believe
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 that being a
celebrity
 has more advantages than problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adoration
  • scrutiny
  • paparazzi
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • substance abuse
  • luxurious lifestyle
  • platform
  • influence
  • awareness
  • prompting
  • unrealistic standards
  • self-esteem
  • exclusive events
  • networking
  • collaborations
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