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The use of phones,tablets, and other devices while walking in public places has been a concern for many commentstors. What hazards can arise if people are guided by such devices when walking down the street? How could these problems can be solved?

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Nowadays, we live in a world where we heavily rely on advancements
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 technology. While these gadgets help our daily lives, there are
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 having them and one of which is imposing danger to
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 users. There are several risks that could possibly happen in using gadgets while walking in public.
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, we could easily lose our focus while using our phone as we fully concentrate on the content
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 our screen and because of that, we might not be able to see the hazards that surround us
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 will eventually lead to an accident. While there are many ways to solve
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 prevalent problem, the best solution that I could think of would be if the government will impose sanctions
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 those people who refuse to steer away from technology while taking a walk.
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, another way could be if the government will take an action in encouraging people to prioritize safety.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Preoccupied
  • Immediate surroundings
  • Potential hazards
  • Oncoming traffic
  • Uneven pavement
  • Collisions
  • Social interactions
  • Sense of community
  • Mental health
  • Over-reliance
  • Legislation
  • Awareness campaigns
  • Restrict
  • Distraction
  • Mindful walking
  • Infrastructural changes
  • Pedestrian lanes
  • Enhanced safety
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