Some people like to try new things for exam0le places to visit and types og food .other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with .discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

There are some people who tend to experience new things like
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adventures
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,
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taste
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of food while other people stick to their routine which they have known.in
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both views are going to
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of all the side who are interested in experiencing new activities believe they only one
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so they have done their best to try whatever
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them happy and give pleasure.
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travellers who visit around the world or travel with
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.scuba diving, taste variety of food from different
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nationality
and culture.
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group avoid the monotony of life, they make effort due to not to live the routine,
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they even choose
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way to go to the work.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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