The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the differences that took place in Nelson from 2000 till the present day. The
highway
separates the Use synonyms
city
into two parts horizontally, with the majority of the buildings being situated to the left of the Use synonyms
highway
. The number of facilities introduced to the area has increased significantly throughout the years whilst the area of the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
centre
remains unchanged.
To the left of the Use synonyms
highway
, the old market was demolished and replaced by a new shop, which is situated to the west of the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
centre
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, in the North- West of the Linking Words
city
Use synonyms
centre
, the forestation had been replaced by an innovative shopping mall. To the left of the shopping outlet, a tramline has been built to connect the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
centre
to the neighbourhood, which enables swift access to the housing Use synonyms
next
to the university.
It is significant to note that the railway station has been relocated. Now, an Linking Words
up-to the date
train station is currently in useAdd a hyphen
up-to-the-date
,
and is shifted to the right of its original location. Remove the comma
apply
Also
, to the North- West of the train station, a dormitory has been built in an open area Linking Words
next
to the university.
To the right of the Linking Words
highway
, a restaurant, bars and clubs have been introduced recently. A noticeable phenomenon is Use synonyms
the
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a
highway
has been demolished and is turned into a pedestrian walk.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
city
of Nelson has changed drastically. The quantity of sites has risen from five to nine buildings. It is predicted that the number will continue to rise with the development of the Use synonyms
city
.Use synonyms
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