Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, a lot of crimes are committed due to people under the influence of
alcohol
. Some of these offences are minor;
however
, others have serious consequences and can even lead to someone’s death.
Therefore
, the proportion of
population
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believes that banning
of
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alcohol
can reduce the number of delinquencies.
Nevertheless
, I think that it is not the way out and other measures should be taken. I agree that many offences happen because of drunk individuals. Notwithstanding,
alcohol
does not turn people into monsters; it can only release all human desires outward and let them do things that in
normal
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state they would be afraid to do.
For instance
, a person who intends to murder another individual may be too frightened of the punishment. Being drunk, he or she will not think of
an
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aftermath of
such
an action, so in
the
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normal
state
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this
person is potentially perilous for others. The only situation, when
alcohol
has a great impact is car accidents.
Although
, I am certain that they happen only because of people’s irresponsibility. In my opinion, other measures should be taken to reduce the delinquency rate.
For example
, perpetrators ought to be punished stricter than now. I believe that fines for exceeding the speed limit should be higher and
time
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of imprisonment for major crimes longer. Some kinds of punishment,
such
as a life prison sentence are deemed too cruel, but I am sure that premeditated murders should have
such
a penalty. It will make people
to
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think twice before committing an intentional offence. In conclusion,
alcohol
is not the reason for all troubles. I am certain that more depends on a person.
Thus
, higher fines and stricter punishments are
a
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better
decision
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to reduce the crime rate.
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