Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, a lot of crimes are committed due to people under the influence of
alcohol
. Some of these offences are minor; however
, others have serious consequences and can even lead to someone’s death. Therefore
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alcohol
can reduce the number of delinquencies. Nevertheless
, I think that it is not the way out and other measures should be taken.
I agree that many offences happen because of drunk individuals. Notwithstanding, alcohol
does not turn people into monsters; it can only release all human desires outward and let them do things that in normal
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For instance
, a person who intends to murder another individual may be too frightened of the punishment. Being drunk, he or she will not think of an
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person is potentially perilous for others. The only situation, when alcohol
has a great impact is car accidents. Although
, I am certain that they happen only because of people’s irresponsibility.
In my opinion, other measures should be taken to reduce the delinquency rate. For example
, perpetrators ought to be punished stricter than now. I believe that fines for exceeding the speed limit should be higher and time
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the time
such
as a life prison sentence are deemed too cruel, but I am sure that premeditated murders should have such
a penalty. It will make people to
think twice before committing an intentional offence.
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alcohol
is not the reason for all troubles. I am certain that more depends on a person. Thus
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