In Britain, when someone gets old, they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons and relevant examples

The old people’s home is a place where aged British folks go

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when they are advanced in age; where nurses are employed to care for them and the government sometimes foot the resulting bills. Many have argued that the financial burden accumulated by these houses should be shouldered by the authorities which I strongly disagree

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adults living and spending recklessly believing that the rulers will be there for them when they are frail and weak by age. I believe that caring for the aged should be the collective responsibility of family and loved ones. It creates an avenue for us to reciprocate the love they showed us when we were much younger. Nothing gives these old parents joy more than they feel when they spend time with their offspring. I experienced

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hand when I visited my mum with my children, her health and wellbeing improved dramatically. If the government take up the responsibility of taking care of aged persons, it will encourage the youth to spend on frivolities and not save for

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years to come when they will be unable to work or cater for themselves.

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it is only fair that the

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money should be used to cater for the basic needs of the

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community. Spending

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money on selected members of the community will make the others feel cheated

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. No doubt, it is the duty of the government to make sure that citizens are gainfully employed, but ultimately the financial task of caring for the old should be carried out by family members who are already working and earning as

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will make the old folks happy and give youths a sense of responsibility.