the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table and the charts depict information on the

police

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budget

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for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. Particularly, The table shows where the

money

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came from and the charts show how it was distributed. It is clear from the graphs that the

police

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budget

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increases

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in 2018

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more than 10.1m .

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what is shown, in 2017 , the total

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police

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budget

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was 304.7m which was spent for accounting 75 per cent

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a

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salaries

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for officers and staff.

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only 8% for technology .

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in 2018, the

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budget

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was bigger,

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a good amount of

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was spent on technology which lead to declining salaries. Unfortunately, the

budget

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for developing buildings and transport is the same in 2017 and 2018.

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, we could say the biggest amount of

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has gone to the National government in both these years, the

budget

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of local taxes a bit increases,

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and a

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lot of

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is spent on buildings and transportation

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of salaries.