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You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven't heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to enquire about the complaint raised to your manager, Mr Tom Cruise, regarding the central heating system of room 501, I was staying using on 22 Dec 2022. At that time, he had assured me of compensation but I have not received it to
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 day. While coming from a distant village, I thought to take ample rest before my
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 day-long flight to Chicago. But to my surprise, a horrible noise was coming out of the heating system because of which I was not able to fall asleep. Needless to say, I was furious as I was tired and restless. I
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 called your front desk and since no other room was available, a handyman came to put a temporary covering on the appliance to reduce the sound a little. It did not help much and
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, he agreed to pay compensation along with spa gift certificates for the troubles I faced because of the noisy went. I expect Mr Cruise's promise to be fulfilled, and request spa gift vouchers to be sent to my email: ognjenrankovic9292@gmail.com. If not, I will contact the General manager of the hotel through the contact form on the website and complain about what happened here. Yours faithfully, Rubina Gill

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