Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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We are living in a society which is on the big scale very unsatisfied with their current occupation as they are either not good at the job or not meant for it.

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is to wonder what are the reasons for

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and what are the consequences of

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situation.

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essay will take a look at these questions and will provide a logical conclusion. Starting by looking at the reasons for

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unsatisfaction in the workplace

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, one the one that earning good money is by far more important than going after

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dreams.

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, do many

people

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already in young age decide to study

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business

not because they have talent and passion in

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field, but because they know it will open the doors financial stability and independence.

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, are there

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too many who just and simply do not have the guts to go after what they really want in life, either out of fear or out of laziness

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An example somebody who works as an accountant in a law firm for many years,

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even though

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even though

they do not like it there and do not find

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themself

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happy because of it, might stay in

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position anyways because they got used to the routine and are

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scared of what would happen if they would quit. The consequences of

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situation

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however

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, that we are living in a society of bitter and unhappy

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who transmit their negative feelings to their social

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sour rings

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and, which is a red flag, to their Kids. These children will grow up thinking that

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happiness

happens

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happiness

in life is rare and that going after

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true

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is something that only happens in

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movies. To conclude, many

people

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go through life finding themself in a job that they are not meant for which

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fulfils

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them out of the reason that earning good money is more important than a dream job and that many

people

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do not put in the effort to go after what they really want.

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leads to

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unhappy society and unless we don’t

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encourage

people

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more to put their

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happiness

happinness

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happiness

before anything else

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situation is very unlikely to change.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

366 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

dread
passion
inherent talent
fufilling
career
job
fulfilled
unhappy
unsatisfied
work-life balance
burnout
stress
depression
anxiety
self-esteem
emotional well-being
potential
achieve
success
personal growth

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