As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

ONE WIDELY HELD OPINION IS THAT NOT ONLY DO COMPANIES MAKE A

PROFIT

BUT THEY

ALSO

TAKE RESPONSIBILITY FOR THE IMPROVEMENT OF SOCIETY. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH

THIS

NOTION, AND

THIS

ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN WHY BUSINESSES SHOULD CONTRIBUTE TO SOCIETY’S FINANCES AND BE CAUTIOUS ABOUT THE ENVIRONMENT.

FIRST

AND FOREMOST, LARGE-SCALE COMPANIES CAN NOT PURSUE TO INCREASE THEIR

PROFIT

UNDER CIRCUMSTANCES THAT PEOPLE SUFFER FROM POVERTY. TO PREVENT

THIS

SITUATION, NEEDLESS TO SAY, IT IS NOT ENOUGH THAT NOT ONLY BE A PART OF LOCAL CHARITIES BUT

ALSO

TO SUPPORT LOCAL PEOPLE FINANCIALLY. TO AN EXTENT, A LOCAL COMPANY IN MY HOMETOWN MADE A DONATION TO A LOCAL CHARITY CLUB CALLED AS “HANDS FOR CHILDREN" ,AFTERWARDS THEY MADE A DISCOUNT TO SUPPORT FAMILIES. AS A CONSEQUENCE OF

THIS

ACTION, THEY INCREASED THEIR

PROFIT

ALMOST BY 10% IN THE

FIRST

QUARTER.

SECONDLY

, THEY SHOULD HAVE OBLIGATIONS TO PROVIDE A LIVEABLE WORLD FOR THE

NEXT

GENERATIONS AS WELL, AT LEAST TRY NOT TO HARM. THEY SHOULD BE SENSIBLE ABOUT ENVIRONMENTAL AND GLOBAL PROBLEMS.

FOR INSTANCE

, WHEN CARDANO STATED THAT THEY WERE TRYING TO FIND A SOLUTION TO DECREASE THE ELECTRICITY CONSUMPTION OF THEIR COMPUTERS BECAUSE OF THEIR CARBON FOOTPRINT, NOT ONLY DID IT PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT, BUT IT

ALSO

MADE A HUGE AMOUNT OF

PROFIT

AS A CONSEQUENCE OF

THIS

ENDORSEMENT. TO SUM UP,

ALTHOUGH

COMPANIES HAVE A MANDATORY GOAL WHICH IS MAKING MONEY, THEY HAVE TO BE LOGICAL ABOUT THEIR CUSTOMERS AND SENSIBLE ABOUT THE ENVIRONMENT,

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THERE WILL BE THE OTHERS WHO WILL MAKE A LOSS

BESIDES

THE HUMANITY.