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As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#money #businesses #responsibility #society
ONE WIDELY HELD OPINION IS THAT NOT ONLY DO COMPANIES MAKE A
PROFIT
 BUT THEY
ALSO
 TAKE RESPONSIBILITY FOR THE IMPROVEMENT OF SOCIETY. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH
THIS
 NOTION, AND
THIS
 ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN WHY BUSINESSES SHOULD CONTRIBUTE TO SOCIETY’S FINANCES AND BE CAUTIOUS ABOUT THE ENVIRONMENT.
FIRST
 AND FOREMOST, LARGE-SCALE COMPANIES CAN NOT PURSUE TO INCREASE THEIR
PROFIT
 UNDER CIRCUMSTANCES THAT PEOPLE SUFFER FROM POVERTY. TO PREVENT
THIS
 SITUATION, NEEDLESS TO SAY, IT IS NOT ENOUGH THAT NOT ONLY BE A PART OF LOCAL CHARITIES BUT
ALSO
 TO SUPPORT LOCAL PEOPLE FINANCIALLY. TO AN EXTENT, A LOCAL COMPANY IN MY HOMETOWN MADE A DONATION TO A LOCAL CHARITY CLUB CALLED AS “HANDS FOR CHILDREN" ,AFTERWARDS THEY MADE A DISCOUNT TO SUPPORT FAMILIES. AS A CONSEQUENCE OF
THIS
 ACTION, THEY INCREASED THEIR
PROFIT
 ALMOST BY 10% IN THE
FIRST
 QUARTER.
SECONDLY
, THEY SHOULD HAVE OBLIGATIONS TO PROVIDE A LIVEABLE WORLD FOR THE
NEXT
 GENERATIONS AS WELL, AT LEAST TRY NOT TO HARM. THEY SHOULD BE SENSIBLE ABOUT ENVIRONMENTAL AND GLOBAL PROBLEMS.
FOR INSTANCE
, WHEN CARDANO STATED THAT THEY WERE TRYING TO FIND A SOLUTION TO DECREASE THE ELECTRICITY CONSUMPTION OF THEIR COMPUTERS BECAUSE OF THEIR CARBON FOOTPRINT, NOT ONLY DID IT PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT, BUT IT
ALSO
 MADE A HUGE AMOUNT OF
PROFIT
 AS A CONSEQUENCE OF
THIS
 ENDORSEMENT. TO SUM UP,
ALTHOUGH
 COMPANIES HAVE A MANDATORY GOAL WHICH IS MAKING MONEY, THEY HAVE TO BE LOGICAL ABOUT THEIR CUSTOMERS AND SENSIBLE ABOUT THE ENVIRONMENT,
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 THERE WILL BE THE OTHERS WHO WILL MAKE A LOSS
BESIDES
 THE HUMANITY.
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