Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret, Hope

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finds you well. I am Supun who lives a few blocks away from your home. I am writing

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with regards to the advertisement that you have put on the community centre's notice board.

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with, let me explain how can I give you a hand. Since my grandmother arrived here, I was her favourite companion,

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I have experience working with older people. I know a bit about gardening, cooking, and household work. I hope these skills will be useful as you mentioned in the notice.

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, I am a religious person, so I find pleasure in helping individuals like you.

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, it will be merit according to the religion that I believe in.

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, to give you my possibilities. During the weekdays, I work throughout the day, so I will be free only in the evenings. Usually, I reach home at about 4pm,

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I will be available after 5pm. At weekends, I am free at the moment, so basically I am available at weekends. Let me stop here, if you need more information, please feel free to contact me on my mobile number. Best wishes, Supun

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