more and more people buy a wide range of household goods such as television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays there is an increase of domestics being bought,
such
as television, microwave oven and rice cooker caused by higher demand of people
. Though it has several neagetive
impacts, I hold the Correct your spelling
negative
believe
that it can create positive fields in the long run.
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belief
To begin
with, people
keep buying things without checking whether they need the old things or not is a kind of money-consuming, which leads to a consumer society. Also
, the huger range of goods are
eliminated, the more waste is doing harm to the environment, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
such
as water pollution, air
pollution and Correct word choice
and air
cause
some disasters like soil erosion and flood. Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
Last
but not least, the more natural resources are used, the shorter life in
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human
will be.
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humans
However
, people
buying more household goods for their home
brings many significant benefits. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
Firstly
, they improve their standard of living by collecting the most high-tech goods for their families, meaning that they will have more opportunities and time to gathering
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gather
cozy
air. Change the spelling
cosy
For example
, a
washing machine is bought, family Correct word choice
if a
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members
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will have more valuable time to talk to each other Correct your spelling
members
instead
of having to stand for hours to clean them. Secondly
, consumers create a consuming market, which is convenient and smart to serve them buying
their needs. Change preposition
by buying
This
will also
promote the
economic growth and save the environment as well as open up more job opportunities.
In conclusion, though there are several negative impacts, Correct article usage
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people
will solve it
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them
by
different ways. The most important thing is Change preposition
in
people
are approaching to
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human
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