Some people think that getting a degree from univerity is the best way to secure a good job. Others believe that employers value work experience more than a university degree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A lot of people think that getting the best way to secure a good job whereas others believe that

work

experience

is more valued than a

degree

by employers.

This

essay will discuss both views but in my opinion, I strongly believe that

work

experience

is more valued than a

degree

To begin

with, many people believe that getting a

degree

from a university is the best way to secure a job.

However

, in today's competitive world having a

degree

alone won't be enough to land a job because real-world

skills

are equally important which come with

experience

For instance

, a lot of university graduates are unemployed.

Secondly

, having

work

experience

does offer the employer an assurity of what

skills

one can offer to them that the

degree

cannot offer which is why I think

work

experience

and

skills

are more valued. For example, mega companies like Tesla, Microsoft, Apple etc have openly said that having a

degree

is not important to them as long as one has

skills

. To sum up, due to the reason explained above a

degree

doesn't anymore get one secure

jobs

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job

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whereas

skills

and

experience

which is more valued by employers nowadays.

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