You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
on behalf of my company, we organised an all-day meeting in your hotel. Linking Words
Meeting
hall was well organised and maintained, Add an article
The meeting
also
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Correct article usage
the arrnagements
arrnagements
of furniture Correct your spelling
arrangements
arrangement
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
being
appreciated by all the Unnecessary verb
apply
participents
. Correct your spelling
participants
Projector
which was used for Add an article
The projector
presentation
was in perfect Add an article
the presentation
conditiona
and had a good resolution as well. Correct your spelling
condition
Furthermore
, I regret to inform you that your food quality was below our expectations. It was not properly cooked, specifically meat was not tendered enough. Linking Words
Besides
, Linking Words
salad
was not fresh and Add an article
the salad
cold-drinks
served by your staff were less in quantity. Correct your spelling
cold drinks
Thus
, all the Linking Words
participents
were disappointed Correct your spelling
participants
due to
poor food quality. I believeLinking Words
,
the best course of action would be to take immediate measures for the betterment of food quality. You should be used fresh Remove the comma
apply
vegitables
for the salad and Correct your spelling
vegetables
merinade
the meat one day before any event. I trust you will give Correct your spelling
marinade
marinate
this
matter your urgent consideration. Yours sincerely, Ali NoumanLinking Words
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.