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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In
this
 21st century, the mentality of
people
 is changed to a great extent. In the 90's era, the situation totally varied from the present
time
. At the present ,
time
women
 are as equal to men. They can do everything that a man can. But in some societies still
people
 do not believe in gender equality. I totally give my 100 per cent to the statement.
To begin
 with, in the 19th and 20th centuries there was a different situation. At that
time
women
 have to do two things either do household or go farming. But at present
time
 the position of
women
 has changed.
Women
 have started doing different-different jobs.
Women
 started jobs as a teacher, professors, scientists, pilots, IT engineers, chefs, CEO in the company and many more. But ,
still
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 some
people
 think that
women
 are just for doing household and farming work.
Besides
, they can not do anything. The main reason behind the
people
 thinking these negative thoughts is that they are not educated properly. In earlier times there were no schools so at that
time
people
 do not have a proper understanding of these scenarios. They only think that
women
 are not equal to men. The other reason behind
this
 is our old culture and tradition. But some
people
 are following our old tradition and culture. On behalf of
this
 culture and ,tradition
people
 think that
women
 can not do other jobs. At
last
, I want to address that it is very important to change the mentality of
people
. Government should take some drastic steps on
this
 like they can start campaigns on
this
 topic. Government can give education to
people
. And many more steps can be taken to prevent
this
 misconception. In conclusion, I strongly agree that some
people
 still believe in gender equality.
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