Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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character

of a

person

is predetermined by the

gene

. Rather the environment does.

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. The DNA consist of traits

such

as physical look like eye

color

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, skin

color

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, and similar dressing code

can

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be imitated as well and

also

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be

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family history in medical term. The

character

of an individual can be shaped by the educational system and upbringing. Children are like

sponge

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that easily absorbs everything around them.

For example

, a

child

whose father drinks alcohol and behaves irrationally can be educated about the negative effect , and as

such

his mental health will be reformed.

Secondly

, education will

enlightened

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a

person

's

character

on how to show respect , and

differenciating

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differentiating

the bad from the good . Another thing that can reshape a

person

is

the

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environment ,

for example

, a

child

who is brought up in an aggressive society tends to have a trace of high temperament

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has nothing to do with

gene

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genes

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rather

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environmental

effect

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. The

gene

has no effect on

character

instead

the circumstances within surrounding changes one into being worst or better.

Also

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peer group association influences a

child

in different forms and that's why parents or guardian should be able to supervise their

child

on the type of friends

the

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they

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keep,

Furthermore

, morals can be learnt either from church , schools and

other

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decent forum ,

thus

reshaping ones'

character

generally. In conclusion, the

gene

of a

person

has nothing to do with

character

, but the situations surrounding the environment where we find ourselves

does

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.

This

is why education and proper upbringing

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pivotal.