Mrs. Barette, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs. Barette. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not available

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Dear Mrs Barette, Hope all is well. I am writing

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letter regarding the advertisement that you published in our local newspaper. I would like to let you know that I am interested to help you with some of your household chores for a few hours per day

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coming summer break. I can help you to do your laundry. Cooking is my passion, so, there is no problem with that aspect. I can prepare a dinner meal for you. I

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know how to clean the house since I always in-charge in doing it in our home. If there is another task that I forgot to mention, or/and I do not have experience with, I am willing to learn. I am available, Monday to Friday, 8 to 11 in the morning, and the whole day at the weekend. Please be informed that I am an International student, so I have a class to attend in the afternoon. I hope you would consider me for the job. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Jenny Cornejo

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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