You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter - say who you are - give details about the accident - suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain that I have been hurt in a minor accident inside your
supermarket
Use synonyms
in
Downtown. I have been a VIP member of the Change preposition
apply
supermarket
for decades and I have been Use synonyms
keep
buying foods and daily goods in the Change the verb form
keeping
kept
supermarket
for years. The polite workers and the Use synonyms
well ranged
productsAdd a hyphen
well-ranged
as well as the clean flat
Add the comma(s)
, as well as the clean flat,
has
always Correct subject-verb agreement
have
make
the shopping time in the Change the verb form
made
supermarket
enjoyable.
Use synonyms
However
, I was buying things in the Linking Words
supermarkt
Correct your spelling
supermarket
this
afternoon when there were several children Linking Words
were
playing around. The children were so Unnecessary verb
apply
dedicating
Change the form of the verb
dedicated
in
running and Change preposition
to
chatching
after each other. One of the children fell down because of the slippery floor with some water on the ground. It was Correct your spelling
catching
luckily
that the child didn't hurt very much. Replace the word
lucky
However
, the sheet nearby was pulled down by the child when the child Linking Words
Correct your spelling
falls
failed
falled
down and one of my Correct your spelling
fell
tow
was badly hurt. I went to the hospital and the doctor told me to Correct your spelling
two
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
rest for at least two to three weeks. Correct article usage
apply
That is
a big problem for me as my job does not allow me to work at home and I need to take care of my two little young Linking Words
baby
. Change to a plural noun
babies
Although
I am sure that Linking Words
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nobody
no body
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nobody
want
these things Change the verb form
wants
happen
, I do believe that the Add the particle
to happen
supermarket
can do more to avoid Use synonyms
such
things Linking Words
happen
again. Wrong verb form
happening
For example
Linking Words
a
notice of no running in the Remove the article
apply
supermarket
or keep the floor dry by cleaning the waters in time.
Yours faithfully,
TengUse synonyms
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.