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Why don’t people take environmental issues seriously in spite of being given many warning by scientists? Why don’t people save energy in their daily life? Discuss the possible causes of these phenomena and give possible solutions.

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Experts worldwide believe that the environment is degrading at an exponentially faster pace and if not acted upon as quickly as possible, it would lead to a disaster, which will be difficult for human beings to recover from. While there were many false warnings in the past
people
 seem to have lost faith in scientists and the Government. With no materialistic reward to be earned for saving energy nor reprimand for using more, they tend to enjoy the comfort obtained by splurging on resources.
To begin
 with, since the Government and scientists have not been careful about their announcements related
environmental
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 disasters in the past, the public
have
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 lost faith and
assume
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 any
such
 warnings are publicity stunts and have no truth to
it
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. Even if, a disaster occurs there will be no ownership and they would blame the governing bodies.
For instance
, there was
a
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news that in 2020 the world will end but nothing visible to
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common
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comman
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common
 man
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occurred
occured
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occurred
. Consistent with
this
 line of thinking is that many individuals will
also
 not contribute to protecting nature by minimizing the use of natural resources because they have no price to pay or prize to earn. It is extremely difficult to convince the majority to watch their energy consumption because of the luxury it has to offer. To illustrate with examples,
people
 like to transport on
fuel based
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 vehicle rather than a bicycle, extensive usage of modern home appliances like
refridgerator
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refrigerator
refrigerators
, AC etc and extravagant intake of water for washing bathing and other daily activities. Solutions to the above problems can be explained
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twofold.
Firstly
, to discourage
people
 from wasting natural assets
,
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 is
to enforce
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 by law, as a punishable act. When there is
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foreseeable
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 consequence to
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their
thier
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their
 actions citizens will obey the requested orders.
Secondly
, include a tempting offer to the public for contributing towards protecting nature.
Furthermore
, create awareness among all age groups in a sensible manner. In conclusion,
although
 the
deterimental
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detrimental
 effects of issues related to
environment
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 are already being experienced by
people
 to some extent, they deny
to believe
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 that any drastic
horrif
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horrific
 events can occur in the near future.
However
, it is essential to
inbibe
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imbibe
 trust and
help
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 communities to inculcate habits of preserving resources for a
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healthier
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heathier
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healthier
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 environment.
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