Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays there are numerous kinds of
subjects
in the university some people
say students
can choose what they want to learn; others say all students
need to study the subjects
which will be useful in the future. In my opinion, I think students
can decide what they want to learn.
On the one hand, some people
say that students
who major in the subjects
they like, such
as painting , music are difficult to find a job
in the future. For example
, my brother majored in dance I university but he cannot find a suitable career in a dance troupe so he decided to work at McDonald's. Hence
, some people
say students
find a job
if they do not major in technology or science.
On the other hand
, others people
think students
become happier and achieve their goals easier if they choose the subjects
they like. Not everyone is good at science or technology they only feel frustrated when they choose the majors they do not like. However
, they will feel happier and more relaxed if they major in the subjects
they like, which can help them to finish their goals,like dancers and musicians easier. So some people
think can choose the subjects
they are interested in.
To summarize, some people
think students
need to study useful subjects
because it can assist them to find a job
easier; others think students
can be happier while studying and achieve theirs
goals easier. In my opinion, I think Correct the word
their
students
should choose the major which they like even though they probably cannot find a well-payed job
in the future they will be happy and relax while working and studying.Submitted by sinpaulpaul1234567890 on
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