In many countries pleastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies.Do you think the advantage outweighs the disadvantage

In most Nations,
food
and drink
industries
now utilize
containers
made from
plastic
as they are readily available.
Although
this
will give room for recycling thereby helping
industries
minimize cost,it can
poses
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a threat to the health of customers.
Plastic
materials
such
as
containers
can be recycled and used again.Most
food
and drink
industries
would prefer to
use
plastic
containers
or bottles because it can help to provide easy access to
materials
through recycling thereby helping them to minimize
cost
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of production.They would rather encourage the masses to recycle them
,
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than dump them as waste disposal. An industry
who
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uses recycled
plastic
materials
will not need to pass through the process of purchasing the raw
materials
for manufacturing these products.
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Furthermore
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, Most
industries
use
these
containers
for safety reasons. Every
citizens
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of these Nations will have easy access to the product as there will be
low
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risk of hazards
such
as injuries from broken bottles meaning that Children,
adolescence
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, adults and even the aged can
use
it easily without the fear of harming themselves. For
instance
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Coca-cola bottling
company
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companies
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will emphasise the need to recycle their
plastic
bottles because of the gains they derive from it and because of the safety it brings.
However
,
plastic
materials
may be poisonous if not properly produced. As
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it
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production involves the
use
of chemicals which could end up being detrimental to the health of individuals if used excessively.
This
may lead to various forms of diseases
such
as cancer.
For example
,a consumer who buys
food
from a
food
vendor who has used a bad
plastic
container unknowingly eats
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toxic
substance
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and falls sick after a period of time,not knowing the cause. In conclusion,I opine that the
use
of
plastic
containers
have
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more merits compared to
it's
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its
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demerit.Because,even though it
minimize
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cost and can be safe to
use
,it's can result in health hazards.
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