You bought a new color TV set in a shopping mall, but it is in poor quality. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what is wrong with the TV set Say what action you would like him to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about a new

color

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set bought from the Max shopping mall. I bought

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Samsam

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set yesterday at the Max shopping mall. The shopping assistant guaranteed that

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set has a high-quality

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, when I turned on the

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at home, the lightness of the

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cannot be adjusted. The

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is too dim to see clearly. I called the shopping mall right away, and the staff offered to repair the

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set. The engineer came and took the

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back to the store. The engineer called me late today, and he said there was a broken part in the

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set. It will take at least one week to solve the problem. I expect to get a new Samsam

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set. The

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poor quality. I request to receive a new

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set within

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week. Yours sincerely, Ada

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

159 words

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