There is too much noise in many public places in the cities ,what are the causes of these problem?.What can be done to solve this problems

The issue of
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pollution
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,overpopulation of vehicular movement It is an
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undeniable fact that
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city
will generate
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especially in a working environment where maximum attention is needed to work.
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,the number of people that attend a popular
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market
in the city is nothing to write home about .For
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that about 90000 people go to
this
market thereby causing
noise
for people living around there. The best
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to
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set of
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to come to the cities at a particular time,
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more also
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. In
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conclusion
,
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