Write about the following topic. The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern societies, there are more and more countries aware of climate change due to the frequency of natural disasters,
such
as droughts, floods and mudslides. People who live on the earth are consuming
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energy
enenergy
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energy
as always,
as a result
, how to find replaceable and safer
energy
is super crucial for each
nations
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. In my opinion, developing new power resources to replace existing
energy
should be considered
as
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the
first
place. Owning to the
destroy
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from environment
happend
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happened
happen
more frequently, many of citizens suffered from the risk of
survive
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.
Also
, it not only crushed
nation's
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economy but
also
had
impact
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on the operation of
business
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the business
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. The threats from our nature gave many warnings to
human-beings
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human beings
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, reflecting the conditions of over-consumed
on
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energy
. As a consequence, every
countries
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country
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should take the responsibility of protecting our earth. One of the influential methods is carbon reduction, there are
many
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research
indicate
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that
the
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carbon
emissons
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emissions
emission
is
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the main reason
of
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rising
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the rising
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temperature. The influence
from
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high temperature will lead to severe climate revenge,
for example
, glaciers in
north
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arctic
is
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decreasing with rapid speed, resulting in
the
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less board for polar bears to take rest.
In addition
, it's not
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about food shortages, many regions around the world facing
this
urgent problem, and it became more popular
beside
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us. In conclusion, I totally agree with the exploration of new
energy
if we don't take
this
issue seriously, it may lead to an unavoidable situation for people all over the world. At that time, we can't change anything but
to
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bear the result
from
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a human
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human
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humans
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.
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