Write about the following topic. The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern societies, there are more and more countries aware of climate change due to the frequency of natural disasters,
such
as droughts, floods and mudslides. People who live on earth is
consuming Change the verb form
are
Correct your spelling
energy
enenergy
as always, Correct your spelling
energy
as a result
, how to find replaceable and safer energy
is super crucial for each nations
.
In my opinion, developing new power resources to replace existing Change to a singular noun
nation
energy
should be considered as
the Change preposition
in
first
place. Owning to the destruction from
Change preposition
of
environment
happened more frequently, Correct article usage
the environment
many
Correct word choice
and many
of
citizens suffered from the risk of surviving. Change preposition
apply
Also
, it not only crushed nation's
economy but Correct article usage
the nation's
also
had impact
on the operation of Add an article
an impact
business
. The threats from our nature gave many warnings to Add an article
the business
a business
human
Add an article
a human
the human
being
, reflecting the conditions of over-consumed Fix the agreement mistake
beings
energy
. As a consequence, every country should take the responsibility of protecting our earth.
One of the influential methods is carbon reduction, there are
much research Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Correct pronoun usage
that indicates
indicates
that carbon Wrong verb form
indicating
emissons
are the main reason Correct your spelling
emissions
of
rising temperature. The influence Change preposition
for
from
high temperature will lead to severe climate revenge, Change preposition
of
for example
, glaciers in the north arctic is
decreasing with rapid speed, resulting in Change the verb form
are
the
less board for polar bears to take rest. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, it's not a piece of news about food shortages, many regions around the world facing this
urgent problem, and it became more popular among us.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the exploration of new energy
if we don't take this
issue seriously, it may lead to an unavoidable situation for people all over the world. At that time, we can't change anything but bear the result of natural disaster
.Fix the agreement mistake
disasters
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