Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town. Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you think the decision is wrong say what you think the council should do instead You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I heard that the council has just decided to close our
park
which is large and beautiful. And also
the council had built a vehicle park
area, so I am writing to tell you about this
problem.
First
of all, in this
letter, I will introduce my self
. I am Furkan, and I am a computer engineer in a company which is very famous. Correct your spelling
myself
In addition
, we have lived in Istanbul with my family for 2000 years.
There are a lot of wrong decisions. As you know, there are plenty of children in our district, and also
most of the kids are under six years old, so if you remove this
park
, these little kids can not play outside because there are not any places else.
you should do different things. I have an idea about building a park
. there is an area where you will build a car park
but it is not near to the centre. Although
this
place is not very close to the centre, people will confirm this
decision in order for children.
I look forward to catching up with you soon.
Best wishes,
Furkan OzSubmitted by furkan_fener_03 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite