You are planning a tour with your family to a tourist destination. Write a letter to a hotel manager asking about the availability of accommodation for the days you will be here and also tell him what type of room you prefer.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is

Dmootry

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Dmitry

and I would like to know about which suites are available to reserve

weekend. I am

traveling

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with my wife and two little children. We are going to arrive on Friday evening and leave on Monday morning. Because the kids are too small to eat in the restaurant, we need a room with kitchen amenities.

Also

, I have noticed on the hotel website, that there are a few rooms with a stunning view

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the sea, and I am specifically interested in booking one of them.

, taking into account that the whole family will be very tired after several hours of driving on Friday, I would really appreciate

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it if

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our room is not above the loud bar. It is very important

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because the

last

time we stayed at your hotel my wife could not fall asleep due to the noise. Please let me know, which options

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you have present. Should you not have any rooms that match all our criteria, please describe, what

in particular

is missing. I would be grateful if you could reply to my e-mail until Tuesday. Sincerely yours,

Dmootry

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Dmitry

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are planning a tour with your family to a tourist destination. Write a letter to a hotel manager asking about the availability of accommodation for the days you will be here and also tell him what type of room you prefer.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe working from home is better than going to an office. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that children’s time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. Others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification.