ome people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

The above line chart provides information about four different
cafes
in terms of revenue over a twelve-month period in New York. In general, a look at the graph shows that the Tea Room is the only cafe that showed a downward trend throughout the period, while the rest of the
cafes
showed an upward trend, so at the
end
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the
income
is higher than at the beginning. Another point is that Internet Express has seen slight fluctuations, unlike Wi-Fi Café and Café Cool, which are not stable. The highlight of
this
graph is the dramatic increase in Wi-Fi
cafes
on S. In the beginning, the Tea Room started with an
income
of $160,000, but so far there has been a moderate decline in
income
. While there was a rise in other
cafes
, there was a collapse in the Tea Room. As for Internet Express, it saw a slight decline before J1, followed by a gradual increase, and by D it reached almost $140,000 in monthly
income
. The
next
one is the cafe "Kul". Until November, there was steady growth, accompanied by significant fluctuations. Thanks to a sharp increase by December,
this
figure reached $ 120,000. In the case of the Wi-fi café, after reaching just over $60,000 in May, the peak was reached in July. On the S, it bounced back to $60,000 and saw a sudden upswing until the very end, reaching roughly 190,000 dollars of revenue.
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