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The above line chart provides information about four different

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in terms of revenue over a twelve-month period in New York. In general, a look at the graph shows that the Tea Room is the only cafe that showed a downward trend throughout the period, while the rest of the

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showed an upward trend, so at the

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the

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is higher than at the beginning. Another point is that Internet Express has seen slight fluctuations, unlike Wi-Fi Café and Café Cool, which are not stable. The highlight of

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on S. In the beginning, the Tea Room started with an

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of $160,000, but so far there has been a moderate decline in

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. While there was a rise in other

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, there was a collapse in the Tea Room. As for Internet Express, it saw a slight decline before J1, followed by a gradual increase, and by D it reached almost $140,000 in monthly

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one is the cafe "Kul". Until November, there was steady growth, accompanied by significant fluctuations. Thanks to a sharp increase by December,

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figure reached $ 120,000. In the case of the Wi-fi café, after reaching just over $60,000 in May, the peak was reached in July. On the S, it bounced back to $60,000 and saw a sudden upswing until the very end, reaching roughly 190,000 dollars of revenue.