You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter.

#friends #restaurant #occasion #food #service #manager

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

to you about how my friends and I were very please with the food and service that you provided on my very special day. To celebrate my birthday, I was finding a good

restaurant

and there were at least three on my top list and you are the top one. To choose the right one, I was checking all the reviews that were given to your

restaurant

and overall, all the reviews given are good. Based on that, I had chosen your

restaurant

to celebrate my birthday. I guess it's the best decision that I ever made for my birthday. On that day, we were just wonderfully amazed by dish after dish was served and by each dish's taste and delicacy. Not only that but, the dessert

also

came with a very wonderful combination too. We were enjoying the meal and even till now, my friends cannot stop telling me about your food. The service was the best and fast as well, and the waiter knew when and how to serve an order. All in all, we had a great time at your

restaurant

. I shall not thank you enough for giving us good food and the best service ever. Yours faithfully, Smith

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