Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from a large number of young people who enter into university; however, others think that the large number of people receiving the education of university only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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enter

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university

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nowadays, and

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arouses extensive discussion in society. Some

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reckon that

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is definitely beneficial to the country, while others argue that

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is a major problem causing

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graduate

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. In my opinion, I think there

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more pros and cons when talking about

people

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going for college study. Admittedly, in

university

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,

students

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will be taught many useful lessons, which are proposed to help them with their future

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contribute to their country.

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, if

students

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learn about city geography

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campus, they will probably take

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about

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urban construction after graduation. They are equipped with profound knowledge and skills in their colleges, so they have adequate ability to give advice on solving certain

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problems

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as traffic congestion and housing shortages.

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, more young

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in

university

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means

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that they will be cultivated

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more qualified

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will make for the promotion of

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virtues.

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, because of the increasing number of college graduates, social competition for

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has become more intense. Most companies are desired to recruit

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with higher education

background

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which is a symbol of a better capacity for work. Meanwhile, others who are not so highly educated will suffer from a hard time

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jobs

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, leading to graduate

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. But

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cannot blame on the growing number of college

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. Essentially, the lack of

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is a major reason, and even some

university

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students

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are victims. Especially in recent years during the epidemic period, many companies are under financial pressure so that they have to lay off workers, which makes the

unemployment

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even worse than ever. In conclusion, I believe that more

people

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going

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study

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university

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will benefit

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society

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its current problems and future development.

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unemployment

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is increasing now,

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is not the fault of graduates. Only providing more positions can release the issue.