Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from a large number of young people who enter into university; however, others think that the large number of people receiving the education of university only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

More young

people

enter

into

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university

nowadays, and

this

arouses extensive discussion in society. Some

people

reckon that

this

is definitely beneficial to the country, while others argue that

this

is a major problem causing

the

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graduate

unemployment

. In my opinion, I think there

is

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more pros and cons when talking about

people

going for college study. Admittedly, in

university

,

students

will be taught many useful lessons, which are proposed to help them with their future

career

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and

then

contribute to their country.

For instance

, if

students

learn about city geography

in

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campus, they will probably take

jobs

about

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urban construction after graduation. They are equipped with profound knowledge and skills in their colleges, so they have adequate ability to give advice on solving certain

society

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problems

such

as traffic congestion and housing shortages.

Moreover

, more young

students

in

university

means

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that they will be cultivated

to

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more qualified

people

, and

this

will make for the promotion of

nation

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virtues.

On the other hand

, because of the increasing number of college graduates, social competition for

jobs

has become more intense. Most companies are desired to recruit

staffs

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staff

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with higher education

background

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which is a symbol of a better capacity for work. Meanwhile, others who are not so highly educated will suffer from a hard time

to find

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jobs

, leading to graduate

unemployment

. But

this

cannot blame on the growing number of college

students

. Essentially, the lack of

jobs

is a major reason, and even some

university

students

are victims. Especially in recent years during the epidemic period, many companies are under financial pressure so that they have to lay off workers, which makes the

unemployment

even worse than ever. In conclusion, I believe that more

people

going

for

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study

in

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university

will benefit

to

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the

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society

for

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its current problems and future development.

Although

the

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unemployment

is increasing now,

this

is not the fault of graduates. Only providing more positions can release the issue.