Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly by a high percentage of young people going to universities. Others argue that it only leads to a higher unemployment rate. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

It is debatable whether it is truly beneficial for a country when a huge proportion of students attend universities. Some people claim that it is, without a doubt, a positive phenomenon whereas others hold the opposite opinion.

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essay will discuss perspectives on both sides, and why I believe it is more crucial to maintain the

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of university education

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of granting certificates to all young

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. There might be several positive influences if a large number of

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are able to access higher education.

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of all, if

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are well-educated, they have the basic knowledge to lead a better life

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, and together they have spare

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and are likely to devote themselves to helping improve the country’s development.

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, it

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gives the public, especially people who are born in less resourceful environments, better opportunities to pursue a more promising life.

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, the value of a diploma might gradually reduce if everyone holds one. A certificate might turn out to be worthless but merely a paper that could not show their competence related to the job field.

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, my cousin has been unemployed for more than 6 months now even with a university certificate. According to a recent survey, the rate of unemployed graduates is 5 times higher compared to the rate 10 years ago. It might be true that companies are seeking people with reliable certificates.

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, in my opinion, educational organizations should put efforts to maintain their educational

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to make their students outstand those counterparts. In conclusion, the policy allowing a large number of young

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to attend schools might lead to several positive impacts

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as higher knowledge levels among the nations and more opportunities for all residents.

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, the concerns are whether the certificates are valuable enough to guarantee students jobs. As far as I am concerned, each school should take responsibility to maintain their education

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