Most Children want to watch the same TV programmes or play the same video games as their friends. Do you think parents should allow their children to do this ?

A lot of
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children
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children
copycate
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their
friends
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friend's
friends'
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likes in TV
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programmes
programs
programes
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programmes
or video
games
. There are some
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reasons
resons
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reasons
why I believe
parents
should not allow their
children
to do
this
. Namely, they may watch and play unsuitable
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programmes
programs
programes
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programs
and
games
, it is assumed they do not learn to make choices and always want to copy their friends
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that
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However
, some people have different points of view that will be discussed in the following essay. Watching and playing the same as their mate have some drawbacks for
children
.
Initially
,
those entertainment
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that entertainment
those entertainments
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may not be good for their age and
also
may
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contain
content
containt
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contain
violent
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scenes
sciences
science
scences
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scenes
and concepts that have harmful effects on their minds.
For instance
, some video
games
are full of violence
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addition, they may persuade
children
to copy them.
Additionally
, they will not learn to make choices because they copy their
friends
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likes and never make decisions for
themeself
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themself
himself
,
thus
it could reduce their
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.
On the other hand
, it is believed that
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parents
should allow their
children
to do it
,
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because
firstly
they are
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the age that
want
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to experience
the same ages entertainment
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the entertainment of the same ages
the entertainment of the same age
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and if
parents
forbiden
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forbidden
forbid
them they may watch and play those types of movies and
games
witout
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without
their
parents
knowing.
Secondly
, they are likely to be
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separated
seperated
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separated
from their classmates
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because
becuase
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because
they can not participate in their
disscutiones
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dissections
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about
obout
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about
those kinds of hobbies. In conclusion, because of
bad
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effects that may
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caused
coused
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by those
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programmes
programs
programes
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programmes
and
games
,
parents
should not allow their
children
to choose them without thinking .
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