Most Children want to watch the same TV programmes or play the same video games as their friends. Do you think parents should allow their children to do this ?
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parents
should not allow their children
to do this
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, it is assumed they do not learn to make choices and always want to copy their friends tast
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However
, some people have different points of view that will be discussed in the following essay.
Watching and playing the same as their mate have some drawbacks for children
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, those entertainment
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that entertainment
those entertainments
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and concepts that have harmful effects on their minds. Correct your spelling
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For instance
, some video games
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addition, they may persuade Add the comma(s)
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children
to copy them. Additionally
, they will not learn to make choices because they copy their friends
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it could reduce their self confidence
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On the other hand
, it is believed that ,
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parents
should allow their children
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the same ages entertainment
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parents
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, parents
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