You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mrs Akbari, I am writing to inform you that due to my new position as a visual merchandiser in an enormous shop in Tehran that is full-time, I can not take a part in your great french class. Unfortunately, from the

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moment I started my job, it has full pressure on me. Which I have to stand there overtime for at least four months and because of

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reason, I can not join your special course.

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, I shall ask you if you could manage another private term for me after these four months and I will promise to study and learn fast to achieve the mark of the exam. I strongly hope you could do

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for me. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Negin Afshar

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

137 words

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