Currently,
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families are increasing in number. For
this
reason, it is important to consider who can take care of
children
. People have two different
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this
matter.
However
, some people think that
grandparents
play
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role in
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upbringing, while others think that nursery schools
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the best choice. I hold the view that
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idea is better.
On the one hand, it is argued that due to both
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work, so as not to remain uncontrolled,
children
are taken care of by other family members,
such
as
grandparents
. Actually,
this
is both thrifty and safer because
parents
rely on family members.
Consequently
,
this
makes
parents
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.
Secondly
, it is irrefutable that being
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by
grandparents
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children
to learn their family tradition nearer.
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result
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being informed about their previous generation and
activities will help them to keep
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family culture.
On the other hand
, I firmly believe that
grandparents
don't have adequate experience to look after
children
, even some of them are physically feeble and inactive,
hence
parents
have sufficient reasons to put their
children
in childcare
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. Actually, one of the main advantages of nursery
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is that they have trained staff who have enough practical ability to grow a child.
Furthermore
, childcare
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offer
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which comes interesting to
children
.
Moreover
,
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spending time with
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another child
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children
gives an opportunity to improve their communication
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.
To conclude, both of them are up to the
parents
and family
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.
Although
how much
grandparents
are safer for
children
, childcare
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have professional
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and
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looked after by experts will be beneficial for them to adapt
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easily in the future.